sixpenceee:

each box is a zoomed in picture of the art

incredible

Anyone know what this is?

(Source: sixpenceee)

I don’t get it. Manson wasn’t a serial killer, he was persuasive but he didn’t actually kill.

(Source: wakingth3dead)

I do find it a little funny …

A few months ago I had mentioned liking how Volvos look. Wife didn’t want one because the emblem is the masculine/male symbol. I did some research and it is actually the symbol for iron. A symbolic component of the vehicles strength. She relented her position a little after that—even more after driving one apparently.

She loves hers.

The cute little car my wife now drives.  2007 Volvo S40.

Know what i hate more than wasting a third if my overtime in a stupid meeting being non-productive?

Being forced to come in on overtime and there’s nothing to do. Don’t get me wrong, sitting doing nothing is good and all, but it is wasted time that i could be using to be productive at home.

dutchster:

pepsi pranks some londoners waiting at a bus stop

That is great.

It had to happen eventually …

Sponsored posts. Now i for Taco Bell advertisements popping up on my dash. So much for ths land of the free.

At least i can still say what i want: TACO BELL IS SHIT!

We went and looked for a new car for my wife last night …

A 2007 Volvo S40.

During the test drive the sales guy mentioned this little car had a surprisingly large trunk. So I asked if it was large enough to haul a few bodies. My wife scolded me but he said probably four or so.

It’s good to know that there are a few people out there that get me.

Big freakin surprise …

My wife was so jazzed to try roller derby. She took a few classes, spoke of how she was improving each time she came home but apparently she isn’t improving quickly enough and is now quitting. I’m glad our daughter doesn’t quit things so easily.

I spent about ten years and earned over two hundred credits to get my BA and various other certificates/AA …

All to end in nothing for a career.

For a measly 36 credits i can acquire the knowledge to get a CCNA which should help me start a good career in Networking.

Not sure about the jump though.

“Writing Advice: by Chuck Palahniuk

In six seconds, you’ll hate me.
But in six months, you’ll be a better writer.

From this point forward—at least for the next half year—you may not use “thought” verbs. These include: Thinks, Knows, Understands, Realizes, Believes, Wants, Remembers, Imagines, Desires, and a hundred others you love to use.

The list should also include: Loves and Hates.
And it should include: Is and Has, but we’ll get to those later.

Until some time around Christmas, you can’t write: Kenny wondered if Monica didn’t like him going out at night…”

Instead, you’ll have to Un-pack that to something like: “The
mornings after Kenny had stayed out, beyond the last bus, until he’d had to bum a ride or pay for a cab and got home to find Monica faking sleep, faking because she never slept that quiet, those mornings, she’d only put her own cup of coffee in the microwave. Never his.”

Instead of characters knowing anything, you must now present the details that allow the reader to know them. Instead of a character wanting something, you must now describe the thing so that the reader wants it.

Instead of saying: “Adam knew Gwen liked him.” You’ll have to say: “Between classes, Gwen had always leaned on his locker when he’d go to open it. She’s roll her eyes and shove off with one foot, leaving a black-heel mark on the painted metal, but she also left the smell of her perfume. The combination lock would still be warm from her butt. And the next break, Gwen would be leaned there, again.”

In short, no more short-cuts. Only specific sensory detail: action, smell, taste, sound, and feeling.

Typically, writers use these “thought” verbs at the beginning of a paragraph (In this form, you can call them “Thesis Statements” and I’ll rail against those, later). In a way, they state the intention of the paragraph. And what follows, illustrates them.

For example:
“Brenda knew she’d never make the deadline. was backed up from the bridge, past the first eight or nine exits. Her cell phone battery was dead. At home, the dogs would need to go out, or there would be a mess to clean up. Plus, she’d promised to water the plants for her neighbor…”

Do you see how the opening “thesis statement” steals the thunder of what follows? Don’t do it.

If nothing else, cut the opening sentence and place it after all the others. Better yet, transplant it and change it to: Brenda would never make the deadline.

Thinking is abstract. Knowing and believing are intangible. Your story will always be stronger if you just show the physical actions and details of your characters and allow your reader to do the thinking and knowing. And loving and hating.

Don’t tell your reader: “Lisa hated Tom.”

Instead, make your case like a lawyer in court, detail by detail.

Present each piece of evidence. For example: “During roll call, in the breath after the teacher said Tom’s name, in that moment before he could answer, right then, Lisa would whisper-shout ‘Butt Wipe,’ just as Tom was saying, ‘Here’.”

One of the most-common mistakes that beginning writers make is leaving their characters alone. Writing, you may be alone. Reading, your audience may be alone. But your character should spend very, very little time alone. Because a solitary character starts thinking or worrying or wondering.

For example: Waiting for the bus, Mark started to worry about how long the trip would take…”

A better break-down might be: “The schedule said the bus would come by at noon, but Mark’s watch said it was already 11:57. You could see all the way down the road, as far as the Mall, and not see a bus. No doubt, the driver was parked at the turn-around, the far end of the line, taking a nap. The driver was kicked back, asleep, and Mark was going to be late. Or worse, the driver was drinking, and he’d pull up drunk and charge Mark seventy-five cents for death in a fiery traffic accident…”

A character alone must lapse into fantasy or memory, but even then you can’t use “thought” verbs or any of their abstract relatives.

Oh, and you can just forget about using the verbs forget and remember.

No more transitions such as: “Wanda remembered how Nelson used to brush her hair.”

Instead: “Back in their sophomore year, Nelson used to brush her hair with smooth, long strokes of his hand.”

Again, Un-pack. Don’t take short-cuts.

Better yet, get your character with another character, fast.
Get them together and get the action started. Let their actions and words show their thoughts. You—stay out of their heads.

And while you’re avoiding “thought” verbs, be very wary about using the bland verbs “is” and “have.”

For example:
“Ann’s eyes are blue.”

“Ann has blue eyes.”

Versus:

“Ann coughed and waved one hand past her face, clearing the cigarette smoke from her eyes, blue eyes, before she smiled…”

Instead of bland “is” and “has” statements, try burying your details of what a character has or is, in actions or gestures. At its most basic, this is showing your story instead of telling it.

And forever after, once you’ve learned to Un-pack your characters, you’ll hate the lazy writer who settles for: “Jim sat beside the telephone, wondering why Amanda didn’t call.”

Please. For now, hate me all you want, but don’t use thought verbs. After Christmas, go crazy, but I’d bet money you won’t.

(…)

For this month’s homework, pick through your writing and circle every “thought” verb. Then, find some way to eliminate it. Kill it by Un-packing it.

Then, pick through some published fiction and do the same thing. Be ruthless.

“Marty imagined fish, jumping in the moonlight…”

“Nancy recalled the way the wine tasted…”

“Larry knew he was a dead man…”

Find them. After that, find a way to re-write them. Make them stronger.

— (via 1000wordseveryday)

Redoing this just so I don’t lose it before I can read it all.

(Source: wingedbeastie)

Taking about having to work on Saturday:

Facebook: bummer, Saturday OT.

Tumblr: Saturday OT. Fuck it, if i can get my hair to look decent, I’m skipping a shower today. My coworkers will just have to live with my funk.

You guys are like my internet spouse. I can share everything with you.

:-)

brutalgeneration:

Oregon Coast by Jesse Estes on Flickr.

This looks like something from a Myst game.

Wanna talk about feeling alienated?

My wife told me she doesn’t want to go help her with the shopping since it is becoming increasingly difficult watching me walking around. I wonder how things are going to go when we take the family vacation and end up at Disney world/Universal Studios. 

How the fuck does she think that’s going to go?

Wanna talk about feeling alienated?

I had these black gloves that I’ve had for a long time. I use them for driving in the winter, they help keep my hands cold …

I used to call them my strangling gloves,

then my kids started calling them my strangling gloves,

then I used to say “My kids call these my strangling gloves,”

Oops—I stopped that.

I last saw them Saturday when we went to take one of our cars out for an oil change. Now I cannot find them.

Sucky sucky shit. I love those gloves. They were from Wilson’s Leather and I have had them since my daughter was a baby and she’ll be fifteen in a few weeks. They need to be replaced, but where would I go for nice long lasting leather gloves now?